EDITED: This is the new add..

FizyMusic Centre v8.3

ok la style cam tu clean dan navigation pun senang. Forum punya skin pun cool! Ko kena la rajin update dan promote!

all the best!

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Can you repost that url again? the dns doesn't seem to want to resolve on it. Or maybe its another streamyx problem with "international connections"......

Fizy,

First off, it's a bit troublesome if you give a redirector url for a HTML site check instead of the url where the files are located. But nevertheless, I did locate http://fizzyboy.free.fr ... Frankly, that's a shorter url than your redirector, so why not use that instead?

Better use of CSS would have been better in this website. Home.html, in the main frame, has several bits of styleguides and font tags all over the place. They ought to be centralised in the head section for more readable and standardised code.

I also found several div tags with ids like Layer1 and Layer7. I couldn't find the javascript which calls them. Perhaps you'd like to tell us what these div tags are supposed to do. I thought they might have belonged to a script that you had installed earlier but later removed.

I also found no less than THIRTY empty paragraph tags at the bottom of home.html but I couldn't discover the reason why. You ought to clean up the code there. Or else specify a height in the table cell that surrounds that area or use the more efficient br tag instead.

And just one final comment. If you're going to take a design from Mattsdigitaldesigns.com and NOT credit them, then I suggest ERASING all trace of them. (I hate to use the word steal because it is offered free under condition.) It was very careless of you to leave the title in the top.html as a hot trail. Besides, have a bit of class and take templates from nicer places, not awful crap like Matt's. ;-)


Tim

thanks for the feedback guys..

thefinalmistic,
thanks! erm..
aku jeles la ngan website kau..
pawer giler.. hahaha..


timyang,
ops~ actually my previous post is already outdated.. you can see that i posted that like several months ago.. i used brinkster back then so that's why i got myself a shorter url.. hehe.. sorry about that.. oh btw, yes.. i did use the template but i'm not thinking of using it permenently of course lol

now i got hosted! *grins* yeehar.. plus, i just changed the layout.. it's version 8.3 now! take a look!

http://fizyboy.free.fr

your comments are very much appreciated!
thanks in advance!

Fizy

Had a look at your new site.

Much better. Almost validates using the w3.org HTML validator.

Line 108, third line under the body tag. You have an extra /strong and extra /font tag.

There are also three /p tags after that. They are extra and should be deleted.

You can ignore the ID errors. The validator is not configured for CGI validation.

And whether you ignore the script TYPE and ALT warnings are up to you. They don't harm the code and soemtimes I think SOME W3 standards are a bit picky. This is one of those occasions.

Now that it is virtually validatable, I would also suggest using external CSS scripts and javascripts instead of embedding them in the HTML code.

You can also save a bit of code and make it more professional by using the THREE letter identification of colours in CSS instead of the SIX. eg. ffffff is actually fff. And cc0000 is actually c00. And e2e2e2 is actually e2e.

Also, try making it XHTML (HTML 5) validatable. It's almost there. Just use br / instead of br.

Nice work!

Tim

thanks tim, i'll take those into account when designing a new one

hmm.. what about all the layout and stuff? any comments?

layout kasi tambah grafik sket... web structure pun kasi lawa sket bagi user-friendly, senang sket org nak navigate.. refer kat web² entertainment.. cth mcm www.tokeikedai.net.my ni ade database...

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a'kum! i'm kinda stupid at designing webpage layout. just tellin that your site kinda cool. huu. hope i'll learn more on design there. hey, where's the meteora songs? kuherx kuherx!