ive optimised the file and i think it shouldnt be that long anymore...hope u guys could give comments on the site..thank u

fitzravia.hotfire.net

yes, got improvement.

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Still slow loading at my con. speed.

The preloader wasn't good some how..
actually, refer to another flash site, the preloader should be light for fast loading.

I think the preloader u used is from somewhere free fla. so you dont understand it much.

btw, from my past experience.. here's some tips of mine :

1. Separate the Main Flash movie scene from the preloader.
so that should be Scene 1 for Preloader. Scene 2 is for others contents. You try and you'll know more and Why

2. The enter button after load complete wasnt GOOD enough. U see? If i can't click absolutely on the text, the link wont work. So mean i must really put my cursor ON the small text?! huh.. Sooo.. u should do like this :
Make a RECTANGLE with any color, place it OVER and cover all the 'enter' text, Turn the rectangle ALPHA to 0% (transparent 100%!) soo.. u can get a good button!.

3. Study LOAD MOVIE CLIP for more performance, separate all the movie into movie clip then combine it into a main movie..

My advice.. u need study more on :
1. Making a Good button
2. Load movie clip.

However.. overall is fine! and okay..
PoV : 5.5/10

Gud luck!

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Actually ive already separated the preloader scene form the movie scene..they are not in the same scene like mysticmind said..About the button i think i can try to repair..the preloader i got it from flashkit coz i dont know how to make one!! the main problem to me was how to make the movie load faster..optimization..do i have to optimize every jpeg in photoshop or wut?....anyway thank u for ur coments and advice...

4/10...

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bolehlaaaa.....not bad!

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I dare not look seeing 4/10 rating here.

Now I'm in and seeing the flash is actually very easy to navigate. Not sure what is the whole website all about. Lacks of awesome design - should check Designers depot thread [Designer's Depot Compilation] for some cool ideas. It has music and I think the header is bigger than the content.

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sloww lagi laaa braderrr....tapi...aku rasa ko nyer site mmg nice!
Baper lama masa yg ko amik utk siapkannya?

http://www.silpuaka.tk
http://www.silaungpawaka.cjb.net

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also optimize for search engines:

http://www.search-this.com/website_p...ize_Flash.aspx

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sorry lama tak login...silpuaka aku amik masa 3 minggu.skrang dah buat fitzravian V2.tapi cam dah stop half way..camner aku nak post fla file tuh kat sini supaya korang boleh komen?? maybe aku boleh semangat balik nak buat sampai habis??

why used english language?

huhuhuhu sorry.want me to speak english?

alooo to all, nak optimum kan aku rasa ade software yang boleh minimumkan fla, kalu nak bagi aku e-mail lu, nanti aku sent...