please review

Malaysia Hotel

and comments...

thanks ~ !

it is clear that you create the website just to get profit from the adsense.
what comment do you need then?

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LiewCF | Malaysia Bloggers Forum

it's too obvious unless you can brush up the design again

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Ya, indeed a built for adsense site. Really need to put extra effort on the design.

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aLvinHan of ViNSiGN Web Design in Labuan and PJ

Hi bro,

Thanks for sharing.

Adviseable to re-design the layout of your website with some match coloration. Furthermore, you need to insert some pics into your website too so that your web will be more attractive.

All the best.

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Change The logo, at the moment it makes me want to puke. Malaysia has many beautiful views, how about using some photos of them in your logo.

It’s very hard to read with the colours and font combination that you have used, also your copy needs a grammar check. Wile on the subject of copy, the start of the second paragraph ‘Tourism industry in here had "bomb" recently.’ You should remove this line of text as it is very negative and not a daily event! Also I think you want to encourage people to visit your country not frighten them away, so keep with the positive things about Malaysia there are many of them!

When talking about a hotel or a region you should include some images that go with your text to add a bit more interest.

heheh..erm banyaknyer iklan...teruja aku menengoknyer..aku nak letak iklan kat situ gak leh ker,,,,tapi aku tak bayar ko ler...hikhik...

dan page yang sesempoi ini ader site map!sungguh mengharukan!~
katakan ler aku sbg pelancong..erm...mesti haku hangin dgn website nih..sebab carian hotel guna google search jer...hikhik..nasib baik aku tak suka duk hotel..erm...

dan ader testimonial pasal hotel kat mesia nih..(beberapa kerat hotel)...erm nak quote sikit dr page awak boleh ker....

....Customers are treated very well by hotel’s staff. Six month ago, I lost my wallet in one of that hotel. Their stuff had done their best to find my wallet. Finally, I found my wallet in my bag....

sungguh terharu...rupa2nya ada dalam beg sendiri...
keseluruhannya saya mmg suka website nih...sleek and comel.urMMmmMm...

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Walaupun ramai dah komen, tapi rasa nak komen jugak. Walaupun jelas nak cari untung adsense, mungkin tak ramai tourist yg kisah. Tapi, sebab kau dah ambik topik Malaysia Hotel ni kena la bagi impression yg baik untuk negara Malaysia ni. Website kena cantik, bahasa pun kena cantik.

Ingat, bahasa berbual dan bahasa tulisan ada bezanya, especially dalam English.

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budding junior commentor

For wht it's worth,

1. Font characters not consistent.
2. Good try, but need to brush up on grammar if you are to target non-Malaysians
3. Boring, no pictures
4. Kept site layout consistent, which is good
5. Design is too bland
6. Correct me if I am wrong but shouldn't it be Malaysian Hotels instead of Malaysia Hotel?

Keywords, man... KEYwords. Think SEO.

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budding junior commentor

LOL, but sacrificing the grammar for SEO...furthermore, it does not have any meaning.

i.e Japan Hotel, France Hotel, Spain Hotel, MALAYSIA Hotel

lemah dari segi bahasa... ade soft check grammar x?

Microsoft Word pun ada.

Kalau nak lebih lagi, cuba try http://www.dynawares.com/spell.htm. No guarantees, cuba sendiri.

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bang kan aku dah cakap design balik

yang die suh brush up tu aku dah design blk la.. isk.. da lme da design blk...